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tears in the shower

By A Far Cry

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Naked, dirty and alone. The flow is soothing. Hearing every drop hit the tub, feeling clean. My heart feeling warm, like the water, at least while I'm here. The hot water is running out, I hardly noticed. I still feel warm, and sitting in this place, I cant decide which droplets are my tears, and which are from the shower. Everything is circling the drain, and i dont know what to do. Everyhing isnt what i thought it was. The tub is dirty, the walls full of mildew, and I cant decide what to do, after the water turns cold.not my best but ya know Written February 3rd, 2002 © on Feb 02 2002 03:46 PM PST   18 • 0 • 1

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