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Don't Give Up

By amphibianrose

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

She cries at night, continues at dawn. She's ready to give it up, become withdrawn. Ready to give up her life as it's been. Ready to prove to herself she can't win. All for a man who couldn't wait to love. Wouldn't wait for things to improve, when push came to shove. Don't despair my wonderful, lovely friend. There is someone out there. There til the end. I know you miss him, I know you're alone. But, I'm always there. Face to face, or on the phone. Don't give up now, show him you're strong. Your relationship with him is over, it was all wrong. I know it's not easy, it will take some time. Forget him you will never, good memories are sublime. I'm sorry I can't say that you both would be great, but as they say,good things come to those who wait. Love ya!!! Don't give up!!!! Written March 9th, 2002 © on Mar 09 2002 07:56 AM PST   0 • 10

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