The day that changed every breathing moment
By AuburnRaene
Burning tears streamed down my face that day And I remember all you could do was look away. I poured out my heart and soul I was shy but yet I strayed if only for a moment to plead with you to stay I needed you so desperatly so you reminded me that you had to go Sometimes, even today, I go back to that dark place and remember the expression that engulfed your dying face I can not put into words how it felt when I recieved the call mind numbing pain my heart seconds from the fall I have tried to move on and I suppose that someday I shall Just know that now and always I Love YouI know that this doesn't flow well and I know that the rhyming is off but this piece means alot to me and I don't want to alter anything but I would love suggestions on anyway I can elaborate. I was almost at a loss for words writing this { Point proven :-)}and I would love to know how to make it a little more elaborate. Written November 20th, 2001 © on Nov 20 2001 02:31 PM PST 18 • 0 • 1
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"Burning tears streamed down my face that day..."