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So this is it?

By berkels

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So this is it? what its built up to be? Love is supposed to be great but this is all i can see. heartache, pain, emptyness, sorrow, misery, hurt. its not what it used to be, when we etched our names in the dirt We said together forever, what a fib when you look at your child inside your crib You hope your child will never see a pain as painful as the pain in me Love isnt all, its built up to be now, the rest of your life, this is what you'll see Your child growing up, Making a friend Maybe the friend that will stick with her til the end. And you hope she wont share the things you went though You hope that her love will be faithful and trueHey this is my latest, i hope you like it! Written July 9th, 2001 © on Jul 09 2001 03:48 AM PST   0 • 12

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