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A Mistake

By blackTear

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I heard someone knocking hard in the dooranxious I said 'I'll be there in a moment'wondering why that person was knocking that way for?I opened it and heardwhat you did was so silly!I'm sorry but I'll tell my friend Billyand he was just passing by and stoppedhe yelled, what did you do?!and I wish it wasn't truebut it was, I slept with someone else,I started to cryand said 'That was a mistake'he said 'stop crying, those tears are fake'but I was really sorry,he was acting crazythat's why I was worriedone last time I said 'That was just the moment,stop saying dirty comments'but finally he didn't forgive meand I guess that was the way it had to be.I should've thought it betterbefore losing the person I really carednow I'm lonelyand I think that's what I deserve. Written January 3rd, 2002 © on Jan 11 2002 09:04 AM PST   10 • 0 • 8

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"I heard someone knocking hard in the dooranxious I said 'I'll be there in a moment'wondering why that person was knocking that way for?I opened it and heardwhat you did was so silly!I'm sorry but I'll tell my friend Billyand he was just passing by and stoppedhe yelled, what did you do?!and I wish it wasn't truebut it was, I slept with someone else,I started to cryand said 'That was a mistake'he said 'stop crying, those tears are fake'but I was really sorry,he was acting crazythat's why I was worriedone last time I said 'That was just the moment,stop saying dirty comments'but finally he didn't forgive meand I guess that was the way it had to be.I should've thought it betterbefore losing the person I really carednow I'm lonelyand I think that's what I deserve...."

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