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The Urge

By BobInAustinTexas

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so i put my gun down, now what ? you want to talk now, so what ! take a step closer see what happens, then what ? you want me to do what you say, or what ? i picked my gun back up, now what ? you look at me with hate in your eyes, so what ! I'm going to empty my clip, then what ? you actually want me to listen to you, or what ? you're right it's almost over, now what ? i've paid for my time and also yours, so what ! just keep backing up towards the wall, then what ? looks like it's time for you to go now, or what ? well.... just another day at target practice....was trying something out, i wanted to see if i could use the same phrase at the end and still make sense... Written March 12th, 2002 © on Mar 12 2002 06:30 AM PST, Bob   18 • 0 • 10

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