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By Butterfly

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Out in a dry, cracked field, I look to the sky. I see the storm clouds gathering, And I hope I stand a field, And I hear the thunder roll. It shook it me to the bone. Then as I watch, The sky opens up, And the rain begins to fall. Let it rain, Let it pour, I don’t care anymore, Let the rain fall down on me. The earth needs the rain, The plants need the rain, The animals need it too. I need it to live, I need it to survive, And so do you. I need it to live, I need it to survive, And so do you. Let it rain, Let it pour, I don’t care anymore, Let the rain fall down on me.THis is actually a song I've been bouncing around. It's really rough, so please, let me know if you have any thought on it. I have the chorus down, but am having trouble with the rest of the lyrics. Written March 11th, 2002 © on Mar 11 2002 12:55 AM PST   18 • 0 • 1

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