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Going Down

By caf

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Take the knife, run it slow, down the arm let it go it won't stop till it's dry he blood has left, now you die Better place? so you think, you're not welcome, you start to sink Down to the bottem, that's where you will stay Forever in hades, that is the way Now you've hit the bottem, and you feel a pain inside. that's the devil and he's got your soul, you've got no where to hide.There is no real title... i would love any opinions of what i should call it... it doesn't really matter to me if it ever gets a title... anyways i hope ya liked. Written October 30th, 2001 © on Oct 30 2001 12:41 PM PST   0 • 10

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"Take the knife, run it slow, down the arm let it go it won't stop till it's dry he blood has left, now you die Better place? so you think, you're not welcome, you start to sink Down to the bottem, that's where you will stay Forever in hades, that is the way Now you've hit the bottem, and you feel a pain inside. that's the devil and he's got your soul, you've got no where to hide.There is no real title... i would love any opinions of what i should call it... it doesn't really matter to me if it ever gets a title... anyways i hope ya liked...."

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