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Goodbye

By caf

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Let me paint you a picture.It's a beautiful Autumn day,The wind is so refreshingthe leaves are falling and the sky is a light grey.but no rain yet...I walk into the building,Death's building...I have been here beforemany timestoo many times,'Hello, How are you doing with all of this?''I'm doing just fine'Everyone wants to help, But how could they?We sit, and i listen to a speakerhe's of my bloodbut i don't know himHe talks of his fatherMy father.Outside is dry,but i'm soakedboth shouldersfilled with tearsfrom crying eyes.The man is finished, it's time to leavebut first...One woman in the backStands up,opens upand starts...'Amazing Grace'Drowns out all sounds of cryingPeople just amazedsit and listentears still fall but people still listenThen,everyone gets upAs we walk away down the hall,6 men walk out firstcarrying a largeblack box.As the lady in the backstarts to sing'Ave Maria'People know it's the endNo more to see, good byes were saidit's time to leave.Step out of the carand form a large circlethe rain startsthe wind is too muchPeople sway side to sidethere is almost a voicesomething in the windThe rain is to hardIt's time to leaveGood bye.Don't ask me what that was lol... I think I've suddenly gone stupid lol... weird , i just started typing and that's what happened. If you can make any sense of it.. all the power to you! lol.. Bye for now,Caf Written November 4th, 2001 © on Nov 04 2001 07:27 AM PST   0 • 1

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"Let me paint you a picture.It's a beautiful Autumn day,The wind is so refreshingthe leaves are falling and the sky is a light grey.but no rain yet...I walk into the building,Death's building...I have been here beforemany timestoo many times,'Hello, How are you doing with all of this?''I'm doing just fine'Everyone wants to help, But how could they?We sit, and i listen to a speakerhe's of my bloodbut i don't know himHe talks of his fatherMy father.Outside is dry,but i'm soakedboth shouldersfilled with tearsfrom crying eyes.The man is finished, it's time to leavebut first...One woman in the backStands up,opens upand starts...'Amazing Grace'Drowns out all sounds of cryingPeople just amazedsit and listentears still fall but people still listenThen,everyone gets upAs we walk away down the hall,6 men walk out firstcarrying a largeblack box.As the lady in the backstarts to sing'Ave Maria'People know it's the endNo more to see, good byes were saidit's time to leave.Step out of the carand form a large circlethe rain startsthe wind is too muchPeople sway side to sidethere is almost a voicesomething in the windThe rain is to hardIt's time to leaveGood bye.Don't ask me what that was lol... I think I've suddenly gone stupid lol... weird , i just started typing and that's what happened. If you can make any sense of it.. all the power to you! lol.. Bye for now,Caf..."

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