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Death has taken me

By Canon

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I've invited him to me, to come and take me away.I waited and when he came, he had nothing to say.dressed in a black cloak and hood covering his face.I asked him one simple question, can you take me from this place.He nodded in agreement, then he took my hand.took me through visions, from little boy to a man.i saw my first birthday, i saw my favorite Christmas.i stood in the past in front of my family, they couldn't see us.I saw my friends from school, I saw my childhood home.I went through many images of life, all till i was grown.I saw the things that hurt me, I saw the pain in my head.So now i am 6 feet under the grass in which i played, i am dead.no longer able to be hurt, no longer able to feel the pain.but now i can start over in death, i will not live death in vain.so my deal with death is over and done, I have nothing more to say.But i will still speak to everyone, just not in any certain way. Written October 27th, 2001 © on Oct 27 2001 02:47 AM PST, Joshua   0 • 1

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"I've invited him to me, to come and take me away.I waited and when he came, he had nothing to say.dressed in a black cloak and hood covering his face.I asked him one simple question, can you take me from this place.He nodded in agreement, then he took my hand.took me through visions, from little boy to a man.i saw my first birthday, i saw my favorite Christmas.i stood in the past in front of my family, they couldn't see us.I saw my friends from school, I saw my childhood home.I went through many images of life, all till i was grown.I saw the things that hurt me, I saw the pain in my head.So now i am 6 feet under the grass in which i played, i am dead.no longer able to be hurt, no longer able to feel the pain.but now i can start over in death, i will not live death in vain.so my deal with death is over and done, I have nothing more to say.But i will still speak to everyone, just not in any certain way...."

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