Skip to content
Linespedia

Dieing isn't so bad

By danie poo

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

I close my eyes hoping to see no more pain crying so hard I am starting to go insane why does it hurt so much only the words do, Not the touch my ears listen yet I don't hear I look at my mom to see a tear I feel so bad and yet I don't fell mad down the hall I see the doc but I don't want to hear him talk the bad news is what awaits it's the kind everyone hates the kind where you already know what he is about to say but know one really knows the price you have to pay his body stands in front of me his face I don't want to see the word come out inside I want to shout To tell him I know My feelings now start to show my eyes fill I stood so still watching the doctor talk to my mom yet inside I feel so calm my mom was very sad that day but I knew i couldn't stay I am not mad though i know you are sad I miss you all in the distance i hear them call I go to the top my love for you will never stop in heaven i stay I'll see u again someday....ok? By Danielle Gaudet © on Apr 30 2001 09:11 AM PST   0 • 10

AI analysis available. Enable JavaScript to interact.

About this line

"I close my eyes hoping to see no more pain..."

Attribution & Rights

Author:danie poo

Source:AllPoetry

"I close my eyes hoping to see no more pain..." by danie poo

For usage rights, copyright concerns, or to report an issue with this content, please visit our Copyright & Report page.

Classified Tags

Related lines

"they make you see through tears and love and friendship seeing your mommy and daddy you are sure your going to be ok what if you couldn't see nothing but darkness what do you do do you ran where tho..."

"When I am about to cry you always seem to be by my side when I feel alone you are there beside me I know u can see me too but I can not see you even though u are gone I know you love me too You let me..."

"I look up to you you probably did the same to your mom too You are so pretty to me through your eyes I wish I could see you always were strong because you were my mom there was never a problem you nev..."

"When I fall I hope you catch me when I’m blind I hope you’ll let me see when it gets hard for me my friend I hope you’ll be I hope you’ll never leave me when I feel locked up you are my key I remember..."

"do you see me why can’t you see the hurt I feel inside the kind I try to hide you did this to me you’ve done it ever since I was three You scream and yell you’ve made my life hell you hit me hard all ..."

"My heart races As I do up my lases When I skate I am never late I steep on the ice The feeling i have has no price I skate around My blades make the only sound Sure i fall But at least no one judges..."

danie poo

About danie poo

Full Bibliography
Continue Reading

"they make you see through tears and love and frien..."

Weekly Poetic Insight

Join our literary Sanctuary

Get the most inspiring lines, poetic analysis, and secret shayaris delivered to your inbox every Sunday.