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Give and Take

By DarkBruce

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

I give you my love You don’t care, I open my heart You’re not aware, I build you up You rip me down, I give you wings to fly You leave me behind to drown. You say you love me, What a fucking lie. But when I say I love you You say goodbye Now I’m alone Crying in my melancholy world, But what’s the point You’re just a girl. I gave you everything And you deceitfully took it all. Then you left me to despair And take the pain of the fall. Written November 16th, 2001 © on Nov 15 2001 04:56 PM PST   18 • 0 • 1

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