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my Endless torment

By dave mack

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Love,my endless tormentat times it makes my soul flyother times i feel like i could diejust thinking about how utterly impossibleit seems for us too even try to be together for ever would be eternal blissbut sometimes i feel like we've missed our chance when we gave echother our last kissyears ago remember all the tears we shed when our two hearts fledthousands of miles apart never to be rejoinedbut fate brought us backtoo give love a seccond chance?or to amuse himself whith a torn romanceto fate our heart are nothing but a toy to play with how he see fitour loves a game full of sorrow and shame fates and his twisted scence of hummor is whom i lay blamewho is he to play with me emotionaly,or mentalyi despise his game and refuse to play i end it now on this day i give my word and thus i vowe to escape this torment somehow----somehowi just started wrighting poetry this only the 3rd poem i've ever wrighten im not to great at wrighting so its hard for me to wright this as it was meant to be read and felt hope you enjoyed it. Written September 16th, 2001 © on Sep 16 2001 02:10 PM PST   18 • 0 • 8

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"Love,my endless tormentat times it makes my soul flyother times i feel like i could diejust thinking about how utterly impossibleit seems for us too even try to be together for ever would be eternal blissbut sometimes i feel like we've missed our chance when we gave echother our last kissyears ago remember all the tears we shed when our two hearts fledthousands of miles apart never to be rejoinedbut fate brought us backtoo give love a seccond chance?or to amuse himself whith a torn romanceto fate our heart are nothing but a toy to play with how he see fitour loves a game full of sorrow and shame fates and his twisted scence of hummor is whom i lay blamewho is he to play with me emotionaly,or mentalyi despise his game and refuse to play i end it now on this day i give my word and thus i vowe to escape this torment somehow----somehowi just started wrighting poetry this only the 3rd poem i've ever wrighten im not to great at wrighting so its hard for me to wright this as it was meant to be read and felt hope you enjoyed it...."

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