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a dream i had in the \"valley\"

By dedpetals

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so, i'm like on this crucifix right... and HE comes down and like totally looks me in the eye and SPITS at me and all these people are like "it's HIM,it's HIM, hes here!!" End Of the World "right?" so they totally decide to copy what had happened like a way long time ago. they SPIT at me, TEAR at me, and I can't do anything but cry (like a baby j) and then i YELL "STOP THEIF!" and then they ALL turn! "UH-OHH" so, i'm still like stuck up on this monstrous cross, whole 9 yards, nails in my hands, nails in my feet, little towel covering my PRIVATE PARTS... End Of the World "right?" so i thought, jeez...these peope are DIGGING at me, TEARING at me, and all i can do is CRY! i YELL "STOP YOUR BELIEF!" and they all turn! so, they like "sacred-cow" me and bogusly unstaple me from this cross and finally i'm down! they hand me a towel and they say "wipe yourself up son". like, i totally do as i'm told, i unfold that towel, wipe up SPIT from my body, SPIT that was spilt from their mouths. NOW they love me?!! so, im like off this crucifix now and HE comes down, looks me in the eye and says "I Love U, But I Was 2 Teach U A Lesson!" i say i say "thank u 4 the spit and scars, i've like totally learned my lesson. never pretend... OMG! Do Not Ever Pretend!"uh-oh:) bet i catch some slack??? p.s. does spell check actually work on this website?? whats up with that?:) Written August 27th, 2001 © on Aug 27 2001 01:52 PM PST   0 • 14

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