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Open, exposed You told me how you felt You felt scared and alone You made my heart melt You told me everything How you were afraid to let me know I said to you to not be worried And to let the feeling flow You know how much I want you I know how much you want me We know everything Your love you let me see I want to be near you I want to feel your pain I want to hold you And shelter you from the rain You say you find it hard To let someone in But yet, your heart You let me win I want to let you know Before I go to sleep My body, my mind, my heart Are all yours to keepWrote this in the very early hours of the morning near the end of July 2001. It's for a very special friend of mine. © on Oct 30 2001 11:28 AM PST, Laura Rose Knowles   personal • love

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