The Day
By fairy muse35
i woke upon a bed so cold what i had lost was about to unfold i was freezing as if I was stone i lifted my head i was all alone then i knew where i was i had added up the clues i was in a coffin i had rose from the deep blues i wasn't sure who had done it but i was going to get my revenge on HIMI want you to be honest. This is my first poem I have let anyone see so I would like ideas on what to change, if it's any good, and what area to put it in instead of just other. Written December 23rd, 2001 © on Dec 23 2001 04:34 AM PST 10 • 0
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