Lonely
By FallinTears
The Dark Loneliness of DeathOn the coldest night of the year,Peeking through the darkness,Is a creature frail and queer,Like a monster out of Lochness.Its breath came out like fog,Shaking in the night,The words of forgiveness clogged,By chaotic, trembling fright.Its body is not visible,Only the dark outlines,The life of it being miserable,Only its fear now becoming mine.I feel myself being dragged,Over to this mysterious creature,Suddenly my breath began to lag,My eyes my only prominent feature.I felt myself being lured in,Into this creature, I felt its breath.Into the shadowy depth within,The cold, dark, loneliness of death.What do YOU think? Written October 1st, 2001 © on Oct 01 2001 02:00 PM PST 0 • 1
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"The Dark Loneliness of DeathOn the coldest night of the year,Peeking through the darkness,Is a creature frail and queer,Like a monster out of Lochness.Its breath came out like fog,Shaking in the night,The words of forgiveness clogged,By chaotic, trembling fright.Its body is not visible,Only the dark outlines,The life of it being miserable,Only its fear now becoming mine.I feel myself being dragged,Over to this mysterious creature,Suddenly my breath began to lag,My eyes my only prominent feature.I felt myself being lured in,Into this creature, I felt its breath.Into the shadowy depth within,The cold, dark, loneliness of death.What do YOU think?..."