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Save me... or let me go?

By FallinTears

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

The wind blows softly like a wave of chiffon across my face The air smelling like sun kissed fingers upon m eyes Pushing me back relaxing into my daydreams I can feel you all around me yet I tend to forgot you’re there Why don’t you show yourself? Like a tiny rabbit scuttling into its burrow as you come closer Whispers escape my ashen lips… don’t be afraid Lost in the abyss of feelings I am drowning Farther and father down I go I still can feel you… Will you save me? Or will you let me go…?Posting a few that I've had in my 'folio. Take a look at my others, leave comments on my work, I return the favor. Thanks for looking, please check back! Written November 7th, 2001 © on Nov 07 2001 06:52 AM PST   0 • 1

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