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Shortcomings ~Challenge Submission~

By FallinTears

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

Passionate desires of loveless hate come forth bringing together as one, In the starless night of dreams without the thought of a second breath To grace the melodies of joyous life of two… found out in an hour of deceit Left in the minute of desolation Warm and aware of atmospheric lies and ongoing pain Fed by the tears of continuous misgivings Growing into the hideous abnormality that mind makes me Unmoving in an empty space Succeeding rivers of crouching aches Bring her fourth to expel the unwanted treasure Unable to see the innocence of love A virgin to mandatory consequence Shoved into a world with broken legs A heart small and pressured Unable to open the eyes to dream Unable to close the eyes to hate Imprinted by the cruel intentions of society Tainted by the truth of abnormality Unloved by the blood flowing within the veins A heart dies in sorrow… A birth tainted by selfish desires Murdered by the gruesome hands of realityAhh.. Written March 31st, 2002 © on Mar 31 2002 09:31 AM PST   18 • 0 • 1

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