Skip to content
Linespedia

rain

By forgetmenot

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

The rain makes me fell all careless and free. It piter-paters around me like the beating of a drum. People say it is God shedding his sorrowful tears, but what if he is just sweating his pitiful fears? It is like the end to a new beginning. the metamorphosis into a beautiful new morning. To many people the rain is a symbol of deression or saddness, then why does it project a beautiful rainbow over my cloudy sky? *aliI obviously wrote this free verse out of my love and passion for rain and contrasting what i think to what others think about it. Written March 30th, 2002 © on Mar 30 2002 02:27 PM PST   0 • 10

AI analysis available. Enable JavaScript to interact.

About this line

"The rain makes me fell all careless and free...."

Attribution & Rights

Author:forgetmenot

Source:AllPoetry

"The rain makes me fell all careless and free...." by forgetmenot

For usage rights, copyright concerns, or to report an issue with this content, please visit our Copyright & Report page.

Related lines

"Dear someone who will listen: I feel forgotten, no hope no pride. I feel rotted out and decayed, and all eaten up inside. Like no one cares, whether i am dead or alive. Whether i weep in a corner,..."

"Dear sweet some one: I know you are out there, some where. Where are you so i can find you fast. Ive been searching all my life for something that is meaningful and will last. I dont know who you ar..."

"Is this who I am, An empty piece of soul? Just another lie told, A substance of below. A serious blowing fuel, With nothing left inside. With flaming anger, With no decisions to decide. I’m a fail..."

"Don't quit on nme now, not after we came this far. farther than any ship can sail, or any shooting star. We've been through everything, wrong and right, we fought everything to be fought, but we won..."

"These raindrops drip down my rosy cheek, These little beads of emotion speak. All this spirit contained in one single drop, All I have to do is smile and this rain will stop. These salty drops of an..."

"You were so ugly, now you are beautiful. You are so great, you used to be pitiful. You used to be weak, now you are strong, You now do right, what you used to do wrong. You are bright yellow, you..."

forgetmenot

About forgetmenot

Full Bibliography
Continue Reading

"Dear someone who will listen: I feel forgotten, n..."

Weekly Poetic Insight

Join our literary Sanctuary

Get the most inspiring lines, poetic analysis, and secret shayaris delivered to your inbox every Sunday.