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Mystery Girl (my debut poem)

By forgottentreasure

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mystery girl hiding amongst swirling shadows escaping from reality one lost day at a time... toss your life salad in the mix, breathing toxic fumes created from your lies... youre lost in your puzzle blind to apparent passageways id controls your life can you feel growing anger do you care to hurt why the struggle to be free evolves into conformity? run away from those who love immerse your life with glass-thin friends my mystery girl have you figured it all out? following radical views "punk rock society" fun and games until you lose... run back to your shadows againI wrote this about a dear friend who recently has fallen down the wrong path..I hope this gets a message across...Is there any way I could improve on the message? Written November 7th, 2001 © on Nov 07 2001 10:39 AM PST, Nichole   18 • 0 • 1

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