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What's Wrong With Me?

By HermitX

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A star slowly dimming in a universeThat will never even noticeWashed away in the waves of lifeSinking to the bottom of oblivionThe hurricane knows no endAs it tosses me aroundI am a lone tree in a growing desertLonging for the days of oldI do not existYou do not see meI have been forgotten and abandonedWhat was is no moreAnd what will be cannotDrawn to the edge of certaintyI have been testedFailure is harsh and believingTears mask the truthDisconnected thoughts prevailNothing ever makes senseMy love finds no hostAs you walk away Written November 25th, 2001 © on Nov 24 2001 07:28 PM PST   18 • 0 • 1

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"A star slowly dimming in a universeThat will never even noticeWashed away in the waves of lifeSinking to the bottom of oblivionThe hurricane knows no endAs it tosses me aroundI am a lone tree in a growing desertLonging for the days of oldI do not existYou do not see meI have been forgotten and abandonedWhat was is no moreAnd what will be cannotDrawn to the edge of certaintyI have been testedFailure is harsh and believingTears mask the truthDisconnected thoughts prevailNothing ever makes senseMy love finds no hostAs you walk away..."

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