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By HiramDiaz

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Can I drift into this collaborationof sidereal dust? On the basis ofgetting to know you better, I stuffTime with novacaine, you smile as I do.You understand whyI wrestle; you love,and I continue to askmyself, 'Can I?'Can I fold you,limb by limb, and putyou in my pocketso I can read you in the even hourand smile as you do?Can I pull you out of Heaven?Can I...love you?i dont really like this 'poem' but id like critique.thxhiram Written November 29th, 2001 © on Nov 28 2001 06:08 PM PST   10 • 0

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"Can I drift into this collaborationof sidereal dust? On the basis ofgetting to know you better, I stuffTime with novacaine, you smile as I do.You understand whyI wrestle; you love,and I continue to askmyself, 'Can I?'Can I fold you,limb by limb, and putyou in my pocketso I can read you in the even hourand smile as you do?Can I pull you out of Heaven?Can I...love you?i dont really like this 'poem' but id like critique.thxhiram..."

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