Ex Solacium
By HiramDiaz
(I.)Early morning:rebellious quilts,crunchy green mold spreading across my blue-black eyelids. (II.)Midday:rebellious train doors,their thick, black, substance smears across my tattered clothing. (III.)Afternoon:rebellious cars,yellow & identified by a checkered striprunning across their side doorsrun over my just-waking body. (IV.)Evening:rebellious bodies apathetically runover my rotting frame. (V.)-repeat-Lots and lots of Angst. Written December 3rd, 2001 © on Dec 03 2001 10:09 AM PST 10 • 0
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"(I.)Early morning:rebellious quilts,crunchy green mold spreading across my blue-black eyelids. (II.)Midday:rebellious train doors,their thick, black, substance smears across my tattered clothing. (III.)Afternoon:rebellious cars,yellow & identified by a checkered striprunning across their side doorsrun over my just-waking body. (IV.)Evening:rebellious bodies apathetically runover my rotting frame. (V.)-repeat-Lots and lots of Angst...."