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The Vortex

By ilenia

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The dreamer looked into the vortex he was caught in the headiness of it's spin For a moment he thought he would be pulled in The sensation was not unlike having sex until he saw a skull and crossbones float by him grinning... Things were disjointed, he wanted the woman that had called him across the great barrier he wasn't sure she was human He had never experienced anything like it, a moment of supreme beauty as she called out to him in  a voice more mellifluous than any sound he had ever heard His eyes seemed to have left their sockets when he first saw her she was unlike anything he had ever seen, but he could not see her clear enough to distinguish any features except her lips and eyes It was more like a feeling of knowing what was behind the black covering yet he could see the huge black eyes that mesmerized him and large ripe red lips turned up in a smile that thrilled his body at the thought of them touching him Where had she gone this rare creature of mysterious beauty Suddenly he saw coming towards him what looked like a black hole... As it got nearer he saw it was her, she wore no clothing for she was covered with her long hair which fell in endless waves of what looked like black satin. It took his breath away, and before he could speak she had him enveloped in an embrace that made him shiver with anticipation He looked into eyes black as coal that said things which gave him a rush, as he opened his mouth to speak she filled it with her essence... He was so overcome he wanted to swallow her whole, but she grasped him tighter and he couldn't move...she made him so ecstatic he could not control himself... She opened her mouth and he was drawn in, and as he began spinning downward he realized he was in the vortex...alone... Ilenia © 2001 Written February 15th, 2002 © on Feb 14 2002 05:20 PM PST   0 • 10

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