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As She Sits...a challenge poem

By introubleintx

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As she sits and listens to the melancholy sounds of Scott Weiland, with a flag tied around his waist, and no pants on underneath through his rasberry lips comes hypnotic lullabies. She feels the despair brought on by a tear as it falls from her face and slowly breaks into a thousand pieces, regretting the hidden adoration that has lead to darkened love, a naked revelation. No longer feeling the jovial laughter, but now to the point morbid anxiety, she thinks of the antagonizing kisses they once shared, now long gone and replaced by a rusting hate, knowing what could have been. Or what should have been had it not been for a midnight rave, and those beautiful androginous people with tattoos, cut in the shape of words, and the hysteria brought about as the ocean calmly engulfed the sun. She sits and thinks of so many things, giant lavender and azure elephants, a sarcastically drawn bunny in the grass, God wearing eyeliner, and so much more and wonders what he is doing now and if she is missed, or if he is as he was, persnikety, and more than she needed.....Challenge Description: write a poem about anything but use atleast 5 of the images and 3 of the emontions i listed (10 points) Images: 'The gray tint of a lonely girl's fingers as she turns the page of a cheap paperback.', 'a tear as if falls from her face and slowly breaks inot a thousand peices', 'raspberry lips', 'naked revelation', 'hypnotic lullabies', 'a midnight rave', 'ocean calmly engulfing the sun', 'beautiful androginous people with tatoos', 'scott weiland with a flag tied around his waist and no pants on underneath', 'giant lavender and azure elephants', 'a sarcastically drawn bunny in the grass', 'cuts in the shapes of words', 'god wearing eyeliner' Emotions: 'Melancholy', 'Hysteria', 'despair', 'persnickity', 'morbid anxiety', 'antagonizing kisses', 'hidden adoration', 'darkened love', 'rusting hate', 'jovial laughter' Written January 10th, 2002 © on Jan 09 2002 09:54 PM PST, Deborah Wolz   0 • 10

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