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Let Me In

By introubleintx

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When I look into your eyes I see the hurt and the surprise. I see the pain you've kept inside and all the things you've tried to hide. And yet there is something more, something I've never seen before. I try so hard to break through, and get to the real and hidden you. But it is buried so deeply still that I wonder how you can feel. How you can go on day to day, no matter whether work or play. I wonder if you will break free, and show what you've kept hidden from me. Hidden for so very long which I think is very wrong. We took the vows to live as one to share all things not just the fun. So think as you read this and just let me in, and from now on a new life we'll begin. Written September 9th, 2001 © on Nov 13 2001 04:27 PM PST, Deborah Wolz   18 • 0 • 1

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