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Liv-Confused

By Jelly Bean

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The day I began to live was also the day I died This was a tragic step because I was just five Now I'm nearly 18 an adult who knew too soon my definition of an adopted child growing up would be;confused. I just wish I knew where to start For 18 long years my father and I have been apart Does he remember me, think of me,or care that I care Daddy come back to me oh I wish I could know Maybe you know him so I've described him here just below He's Theodore Price with blonde curly hair He's got 5 children I tell you I swear 3 girls and 2 boys whom he left behind I'm sure if he came to see me I really wouldn't mind. I hope someday to hear his voice, although others think I shouldn't, that would be my choice. Copyright ©2002 Kelly Denise Oharah Written February 1st, 2002 © on Feb 01 2002 11:47 AM PST   18 • 0 • 12

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