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'Freedom of the Blade'

By JoshDCali

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Someone please hand me a knife, For the pain I feel will end from existing For I don't know what to live for A life without a goal is not worth living The sorrow is now gone from me For the blade has set me free Everything seems to becoming slow my breath that has slowed from flowing Have I made a bad mistake? But that's all it takes I'm leaving this world now For I am finally at peace with the world My blooming flower of life has weithered away.                         -Josh G.-Hope you like this poem of mine its only one of mine and this feel free to comment on it for i can improve it Written November 9th, 2001 © on Nov 11 2001 06:18 AM PST   18 • 0 • 1

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