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Puke And Vomit From A Comet

By kojak24

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Puke and vomit from a comet spills upon the heads of all those who crap their beds with enjoyment from their latest criticism. Criticize, criticize, criticize better to masturbate than munch on tiny little fairy criticisms. Look for content and meaning not for bad construction. Be sure you bring them up ..no matter how weak the poem.. before you tear them down. A poem that breathes can be corrected why discourage with negative interjections because you think that you're perfection? For those with a bombastic education .. or mode of expression .. confounding and confusing others .. does not signify great mental possession if meaning fails with your regurgitations you fail yourself and your expectations. So beware o' cynic your mind is not photogenic but walks backward drinking from the puke and vomit from the speeding comet to fast for you to understand you born without the necessary rhyme or reason to be a poet for all seasons. Better to drop your pretense and get a little f****** common sense. Puke and vomit puke and vomit puke and vomit drink this cup of puke and vomit. My it cleanse your insides and melt your awkward interpretations If there is ability deep within your chest .. you got to show it! Right now your grandiose erudition is making you a faker .. not a FAKIR. You'd be better off as an undertaker. But I know you can do better if you'll just get your s*** together. Even my little mind knows this. ............... I'm only kidding You're doing great work! keep it up ... You don't really suck. keep it up ... Your just a chubby Friar Tuck keep it up ... I really don't give a f***. Let's have a little staccato applause please! I'm just waiting for the train to the asylum. AY! Devils suck my nipples! I'm not wearing underwear! Cross dressing is in the air .. everywhere! Where was I oh yes .. Remember achieving (does it drop the last e?) success depends on one thing .. HOW ........................ WELL ....................... YOU ........................ FUCKING..................... COMMUNICATE ................ YOUR IDEAS.................. Puke and vomit Puke and vomit Puke and vomit everywhere! Got to go now my train has arrived. © William M. Sowman Written March 25th, 2002 © on Mar 24 2002 04:34 PM PST   17 • 0 • 16

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