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'Quiet Soul'

By lilrudyman

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

You have a secret, But I cannot tell. You made me promise, Or I'll go to hell. But I cannot hold back, What lies on my chest. You are my best friend, So I must put you through this test. Your secret lies within, Deep down in your soul. And I am the only person, The only soul that knows. You are a quiet soul, And I don't know why. You are a nice person, But your feelings hide deep inside. You have an open heart, But no one really knows. You must open yourself up, Or you'll remain my quiet soul.Think about this poem before you comment. Read in between the lines. Try to visualize what I am sayin'. You'll understand better if you do. Written November 2nd, 2001 © on Nov 02 2001 10:54 AM PST   0 • 10

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