Despair 2
"Despair" 1 - 23 - 02 Despair comes with the air Fright sets the mood for the night Close my eyes, blackened skies This is a 'revamp' of an older poem--compare, does it seem better???? "Despair" 5 - 25 - 01 Despair in the air Fright comes with the night Another day in this miserable lifeI think the revamp makes it's meaning somewhat, i dunno, unclear, if not cloudy. If so, any suggestions??? Little Leprechaun Written January 23rd, 2002 © on Jan 23 2002 08:00 AM PST 18 • 0 • 1
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