Stranded

'Stranded' 9 - 18 - 01 This pain is just so great You're so alone Blocked by this mindgate You're so alone Feelings of love into hate You're so alone Light doesn't penetrate You're so alone.... Chorus THIS PAIN IS SLAMMING!! You're so alone THIS KNIFE IS JABBING!! You're so alone THESE EYES ARE CRYING!! You're so alone THIS SOUL IS DYING!! You're so alone.... This heart is striving for the love it wants This body is grabbing for the life it needs This soul is trying for its forgiveness This mind is prying possible deliverance (repeat chorus) This will is defying You're not alone This heart is trying You're not alone This love is reviving You're not alone This body is climbing You're not alone.... Little Leprechaun P.S. - If you've ever heard this song - 'Adema - Giving In' then just think of the musik of that song while reading the poem - that's what was in my head, I guess modified on the 17th of Oct, 2002, 2nd verseit's not really a poem but my only song. I don't request critical reading but I would enjoy any corrections/improvements(in your opinion) that you think would be healthy for the song. thanx muchLittle Leprechaun Written September 18th, 2001 © on Oct 17 2002 05:15 AM PST   20 • 0 • 12