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Rage

By LookItsDestiny

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

The sharpened blade, My untouched skin. The incredible rage, I am in. I feel it tear, The bloody cut. I showed no fear, I wanted to, but... The large gash, It stained the knife. Just one slash, To take my life. The blood is dripping, I feel numb. The blade I'm gripping, Helps me realize I was dumb. I wanted to die, I used the knife. They say you fly, In the afterlife.i dont like the 4th stanza that much. if any one has suggestions for other words that rhyme with numb.. please let me know! thank you! Written March 18th, 2002 © on Mar 18 2002 12:00 PM PST, Destiny   0 • 1

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