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in response

By lyricalbass

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ok this poem was written in response to a poem written to me. maybe behind the smile would post the poem she wrote to me so you all can read hers and then come to mine. well along with the reading........... If there was a day i was sad, just the thought of you would comfort me And if there was a day that i was mad, just be you and ill be happy If at times you feel lost. i wouldnt stop looking till i found you And if a person should cover my eyes, i would peel right through If you ever lied to me, sure it would be the same And if you were truly sorry, then i wouldnt have a soul to blame If we ever get into a fight, i would surely accept your apology And if we had never met before i would probably be out looking for me When ever im around you, happy is how i stay If you go through some bad times, ill try to comfort you in every way If i were to ever make you cry , i would gently wipe away your tears And if we stay together, i will be yours for endless years Not a soul can steal me from you, because your i will stay And if you feel helpless without me, i will surely keep you sane If the time comes for you to be mad at me , and you let out an attack In way i would be happy because you finally fought back But i would feel bad inside cause i made you feel that way And i just hope i dont bring you to that point , on any given day And well if you said that you love me, you want to know if ill say it back There is only one way to find out, i guess youll have to wait for the answer to that Written April 6th, 2002 © on Apr 06 2002 02:20 PM PST   18 • 0 • 8

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"ok this poem was written in response to a poem written to me. maybe behind the smile would post the poem she wrote to me so you all can read hers and then come to mine. well along with the reading.............."

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