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should our love go on??

By melanie

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i have come so close to you i wish now that it wasn't true from the start we hit it off so well everything always seemed to be swell then that day came for me to go to me you only let love show you told me you loved me that i have been able to see now we are so far apart we have seen it from the start now i have met someone new there isn't anyway i can tell you no one can tell me who the right guy is i am trying so hard to figure out this i have asked a thousand times why? it is so uneasy to figure but still i try should i risk our love for something so i really don't know which way to go my head is telling me to say bye but still my heart is telling me to try should i give the other guy my time or will it even be worth a dime as i sit here in confusion i guess i will figure out my decisionif anyone has been in my place please give me pointers on what to do.... i am opens for all ideas. Written April 17th, 2002 © on Apr 17 2002 03:22 AM PST   0 • 1

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