your kiss (challenge)
By moonstar
eyes meet time stills fever burns fever chills a brush of fingertips ever gentle on my neck the subtlety of this touch pulls me deep into you as my heart -skips- -and skips- can you feel me trembling? i close my eyes so as not to see but only to feel the beauty of you in your eyes tongue breath so soft so soft and time stands still to witness this i surrender all let me die now let me never wake let me know nothing but to live in a world of this... of bliss... your kiss...ok, so i guess i'm a big dork, but i submitted this for the "perfect kiss" challenge and then all of a sudden it doesn't pop up where the poems normally do and i can't seem to find it anywhere and i've never entered a challenge before so i had to retype it like this and what the hell is going on??!?!?!?!! ummm...anyway, here it is... (maybe it's just getting too late for me...) Written March 27th, 2002 © on Mar 26 2002 05:42 PM PST 0 • 8
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"eyes meet..."