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By PaulJ

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I’ve spent three nights losing sleepOver the first line of my masterpiece:Should it be I?or should it be me?Should it be her?or should it be she?My grammar is so bloody rotten,I wish I’d gone to school more often. Written October 20th, 2001 © on Oct 19 2001 09:35 PM PST   0 • 14

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"I’ve spent three nights losing sleepOver the first line of my masterpiece:Should it be I?or should it be me?Should it be her?or should it be she?My grammar is so bloody rotten,I wish I’d gone to school more often...."

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