It sounds so forced
By RavenCross
It sounded so forced whenever you rhyme,I just found a dime!This is how your poem reads,I sure do like beads.The reason you rhyme is simple indeed,Like I said I really like beads!You're so afraid no one will like your poem,Take the boat ashore and row 'em!That you mismatch fragments that make no sense,When I go camping I take 2 tents.It sounds like it was written for first grade classes,Don't you know you look like asses?No offense to anyone! I'm just getting a little tired of forced rhyme EVERY FREAKIN LINE. :) Written December 1st, 2001 © on Nov 30 2001 03:46 PM PST 10 • 0
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"It sounded so forced whenever you rhyme,I just found a dime!This is how your poem reads,I sure do like beads.The reason you rhyme is simple indeed,Like I said I really like beads!You're so afraid no one will like your poem,Take the boat ashore and row 'em!That you mismatch fragments that make no sense,When I go camping I take 2 tents.It sounds like it was written for first grade classes,Don't you know you look like asses?No offense to anyone! I'm just getting a little tired of forced rhyme EVERY FREAKIN LINE. :)..."