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Song of a Son

By Renokhan

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I've seen your freedom and it's better to forget the submissive behavior that somehow you've kept You see him standing with that new wife of his yet you smile and wave and hurry the kids Oh all those things you dreamt to say unused, you let them simply slip away The act of respect that is his game you let him play it while you act the same He calls you Honey and suddenly you're floored though he uses you still his attention you adore You loved him deep and probably still do never able to escape that he doesn’t love you So you live life free to do as you choose but when it comes to Dad you will always lose Written October 12th, 2001 © on Oct 12 2001 08:32 AM PST   0 • 1

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