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By shadylady

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The gentle breeze around youSoaking up your essenceThe look of your face and your gentle gesturesThe innocence, your adolescence One too many times i looked your wayWatching you dig yourself a deeper hole All those times you asked me to stayThe thoughts and feelings i need to convey The silly child you think I'll portray I'm tired of letting you winSacrificing myself just to see you smirk Hurting me for your personal gainYour relentless gnawing driving me berserkProfit being your only motive I see you as you really are A fool, a leech , a pathetic bastardThe lies and deception driving me bizarre I pity you Written November 24th, 2001 © on Nov 24 2001 11:26 AM PST   0 • 10

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"The gentle breeze around youSoaking up your essenceThe look of your face and your gentle gesturesThe innocence, your adolescence One too many times i looked your wayWatching you dig yourself a deeper hole All those times you asked me to stayThe thoughts and feelings i need to convey The silly child you think I'll portray I'm tired of letting you winSacrificing myself just to see you smirk Hurting me for your personal gainYour relentless gnawing driving me berserkProfit being your only motive I see you as you really are A fool, a leech , a pathetic bastardThe lies and deception driving me bizarre I pity you..."

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