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my reality check

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Have you ever felt that sudden rush? When you and your true love touch? Your heart begins to race, Man! What a pace! My entire life, I didn't believe in it, but now, I've found that one special "it" I noticed it tonight, the moon shone so bright. I saw it in your eyes, our love really is devine! I looked up upon your face, my heart started beating at an unstopable pace. I felt my heart suddenly expand, my hearts fallen for you oh so my i almost can't stand! So this is what it feels like to be in love? Now i see what all the commotions of. I always thought "oh how silly" when i heard of a person in love, now all i want to do is have my love for him grow and grow and grow.I spent tonight with that special someone...i guess it suddenly out of nowhere clicked how much i really do love him....reality check!! lol...almost scary.....this entire poem is based on my "reality check"....and how i never wanna go back to how it was:) i love you soooo much dogan! what would i do without you?? Written January 19th, 2002 © on Jan 18 2002 03:21 PM PST   18 • 0 • 8

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