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'Sailing Ship'

By silentdreams081001

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

Desolate and dormant souls,sending their voices free.Like a ship sends its SOS,human hearts plea...for someone to help them,fine their way back...to shore, to land, anywhereas long as it's 'again'.'Lighthouses' shutter at their screams,and people shut their doors.won't let the lost in so that,they have a chance to find their 'befores'.Amneshia stricken passengers,board to their deaths,jumping from their vessle,when noone heads their distress.'Life jackets' and 'rafts' vexed to sink.Sending hopless souls into the deep.Years later, their bodies found,leaving questions hanging,and teams to do the sounds.(to dive)Checking why and when,who and how,the answers to these questions can be found,here and now.There are a lot of words I used for symbolism I was just wondering if anyone picked up on their real meanings...? Written October 24th, 2001 © on Oct 24 2001 08:04 AM PST   18 • 0 • 10

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"Desolate and dormant souls,sending their voices free.Like a ship sends its SOS,human hearts plea...for someone to help them,fine their way back...to shore, to land, anywhereas long as it's 'again'.'Lighthouses' shutter at their screams,and people shut their doors.won't let the lost in so that,they have a chance to find their 'befores'.Amneshia stricken passengers,board to their deaths,jumping from their vessle,when noone heads their distress.'Life jackets' and 'rafts' vexed to sink.Sending hopless souls into the deep.Years later, their bodies found,leaving questions hanging,and teams to do the sounds.(to dive)Checking why and when,who and how,the answers to these questions can be found,here and now.There are a lot of words I used for symbolism I was just wondering if anyone picked up on their real meanings...?..."

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