~REFLECTED IN THE MOON~
By Silver Angel
HI, ALL... THIS WAS A CHALLENGE POEM. IT WAS INSPIRED BY A PICTURE. EVEN THOUGH IT WON 'POEM OF THE MONTH' I THOUGHT THE ENDING COULD BE IMPROVED UPON....ANY SUGGESTIONS OR SHOULD I LET IT BE?~RREFLECTEDIN THE MOON~It’s been one year since he’s been gone.He was her life, her love; so far from home.Taken from her in the blink of an eye.She had long ago stopped asking why.Living in paradise was no longer a trill.When surrounding her heart was a bitter chill.Each night as she lays down alone.She dreams of the times she was held in his arms.So vivid are the memories of his kisses.She could still feel his finger’s caresses.Dreaming of him was such delight.She could hear him calling her name through the night.“Come to me, my sweet angel”!“Each night I light a candle”.“Can’t you see it reflected in the moon?”“Tell me we’ll be together again soon”.On a quiet, warm, starry night,She gave up her ongoing fight.She left her body behind as her spirit took flight.Together forever they’ll be tonight!She anxiously flew straight up to her love.Who welcomed her with open arms from heaven above.Each time you look up at the moon,And swear you hear someone calling to you.Remember that true love never dies,It lingers up above in the skies. Written September 8th, 2001 © on Sep 08 2001 05:38 AM PST 0 • 8
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"HI, ALL... THIS WAS A CHALLENGE POEM. IT WAS INSPIRED BY A PICTURE. EVEN THOUGH IT WON 'POEM OF THE MONTH' I THOUGHT THE ENDING COULD BE IMPROVED UPON....ANY SUGGESTIONS OR SHOULD I LET IT BE?~RREFLECTEDIN THE MOON~It’s been one year since he’s been gone.He was her life, her love; so far from home.Taken from her in the blink of an eye.She had long ago stopped asking why.Living in paradise was no longer a trill.When surrounding her heart was a bitter chill.Each night as she lays down alone.She dreams of the times she was held in his arms.So vivid are the memories of his kisses.She could still feel his finger’s caresses.Dreaming of him was such delight.She could hear him calling her name through the night.“Come to me, my sweet angel”!“Each night I light a candle”.“Can’t you see it reflected in the moon?”“Tell me we’ll be together again soon”.On a quiet, warm, starry night,She gave up her ongoing fight.She left her body behind as her spirit took flight.Together forever they’ll be tonight!She anxiously flew straight up to her love.Who welcomed her with open arms from heaven above.Each time you look up at the moon,And swear you hear someone calling to you.Remember that true love never dies,It lingers up above in the skies...."