Adona S'ais - Sweet Dreams (Challenge Submission)

Challenge Description: I would like to see you write a poem creating your own language. Something original.. write it in the language you create and ..then interpret so we can understand :) Thanks and good luck. (100 points) Coi za lonas ina pl’ai ji met Sien mel bonto un fr’ai ji corosso Ina gila Imag’ie mel poito spie Skel’a ta couti ji za f’ima Alli ta chera c’ori mono za spina Ina taumo Ombri ta yie mel l’ique sienis Savoi’a zoi Sapol’a ta plivo ji za catie Hiya pi mel oganis San zoi imag’ie za’shi Depan’a mel f’ima Ina chiva Alli ta elosa c’ori illomo zoi Ava isi isoe lon’ada minno pi peservi Apina za lonas ina f’anta met Lo donosae eni ta stassi Ai remere t’abi eni mel donie Ina s’ai ji zoi _____________________________________________________________________ Close your eyes and think of me Feel my breath on the back of your neck And shiver Imagine my finger tips Tracing the contours of your body Let the chills run down your spine And sigh Remember the way my tongue feels Tasting you Savoring the flavor of your skin Listen to my moans As you imagine yourself Ravishing my body And tremble Let the shocks run through you Until it is almost too much to endure Open your eyes and picture me For somewhere in the night I sleep alone in my bed And dream of youI didn't win, but I tried really hard and I'm proud of the hard work I put into this and I think my language is purty :o) Written February 21st, 2002 © on Mar 01 2002 07:38 AM PST   0 • 16