Eternal Torment (A Challenge Submission)
By Slekky
I have ended the morose agony that my mortal body endured only to awaken new torture deep within my soul a pain I cannot reverse I have cut deep into the hearts of those I love the most bestowing upon them eternal scars from now to infinity...... I wallow in remorseThe challenge was to write about your suicide, explaining how you felt when watching your loved ones grieve for you as you float above your lifeless body -- in 50 words or less. I had a hard time keeping this so short, but I am proud of myself for accomplishing this....I've never been very good at short poems. Thanks for reading! Written December 8th, 2001 © on Dec 11 2001 01:01 AM PST 0 • 1
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"I have ended the morose agony..."