Lord of the Flies
By snochica149
The lord of the flies engulfs the world and prays on it like a dead corpse.I am too young to die, too old to hide what am I to to?I am only 15 my life's just began, with all of my joys still to come. Why can't we live in peace, what is wrong with our world.Savages we are born and civilized we become until one mistake is made and we all fall apart.When will this hate stop, will I ever really live without fear?My mind is a blur, I shouldn't have to worry about this.I am only 15 i worry about guys and getting my homework done not war.i am a little worried about the flow of this poem, if anyone has ideas on how to fix it please share. Thank you. Written October 31st, 2001 © on Oct 31 2001 05:18 AM PST 18 • 0 • 1
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"The lord of the flies engulfs the world and prays on it like a dead corpse.I am too young to die, too old to hide what am I to to?I am only 15 my life's just began, with all of my joys still to come. Why can't we live in peace, what is wrong with our world.Savages we are born and civilized we become until one mistake is made and we all fall apart.When will this hate stop, will I ever really live without fear?My mind is a blur, I shouldn't have to worry about this.I am only 15 i worry about guys and getting my homework done not war.i am a little worried about the flow of this poem, if anyone has ideas on how to fix it please share. Thank you...."