Rainbow

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When I look back at the good times we hadI think of our love, even if it makes me sadBut I know someday I'll see you againIt's so sad because I don't know whenWhen I'm with you I feel so completeWhen I am not, I just feel beatNobody has ever made me feel so goodWithin my experience I didn't know you couldAs I look into your eyes I feel something beautifulLike you are my other half, with you I am fullSometimes I feel things don't matter anymoreBut you get inside of me right down to the coreIt kills me inside when I'm aloneNothing can reach me not even your phoneMany times I've contemplated suicideSometimes I just want to run and hideA hero came and rescued me, that's youYou are my rainbow bursting through!Does my rhyming sound forced in this poem? Any spelling needed corrected? Thanks Written November 1st, 2001 © on Nov 01 2001 06:40 AM PST, Cheryl 0 • 8

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"When I look back at the good times we hadI think of our love, even if it makes me sadBut I know someday I'll see you againIt's so sad because I don't know whenWhen I'm with you I feel so completeWhen I am not, I just feel beatNobody has ever made me feel so goodWithin my experience I didn't know you couldAs I look into your eyes I feel something beautifulLike you are my other half, with you I am fullSometimes I feel things don't matter anymoreBut you get inside of me right down to the coreIt kills me inside when I'm aloneNothing can reach me not even your phoneMany times I've contemplated suicideSometimes I just want to run and hideA hero came and rescued me, that's youYou are my rainbow bursting through!Does my rhyming sound forced in this poem? Any spelling needed corrected? Thanks..."

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