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do you feel this too? (Old)

By Tender Rose

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

If I yelled your name, held a hand to my chest; Reaching into the depths of my soul, pulling my heart- Clasping out my sharpness to grasp it firmly within- Pulling it from its core through its most rapid beats. I grab your hand from its side placing my light inside. My heart beating as much as it hurts not having a home. It finding itself most comfortable within your clutches. I close your hand tightly on the place most desirable. I look to you as my heart is beating inside your hand. Even after giving you so much... can you still tell me? Can you tell me?... feeling the blood pumping, the inside pounding that you dont love me like I love you? For this is my heart... if you wish to keep it I shall forever be happy, if not I lose.Something I made couldn't tell if Angst or Love..so Love is the keyword I guess. *~IceRose~* Written October 17th, 2001 © on Oct 17 2001 10:28 AM PST   0 • 6

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