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What Eyes Can't See (Revised) (Old)

By Tender Rose

Topics: Poetry Source: AllPoetry Original source

Tears shedding dreadfully to the ground A spirit feels lonely and despairingly alone You are there standing, staring here at me; Yet, you are not close by ...Anywhere The night when I wished upon a star is gone; Was it all but a dream or did you hear me I felt cold winds shivering as it touched me Though, warm wings surrounding my life secure Always sensing signs of love there, But was it true But at night I still cry myself to sleep lonely and scared.. At times always feeling your very presence again Were you trully watching out for me day after day Am I so naive I dont accept what ....I feel inside Perhaps I see a little more then I ever gave credit for Can you show me more..... What can I do, to see Maybe I should just use my heart, Instead of my eyesAlright,I fixed this poem for people..hope you like the new version. *~IceRose~* Written October 19th, 2001 © on Oct 19 2001 12:16 PM PST   0 • 12

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